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Declined by Bonadea 13 days ago. Last edited by Bonadea 13 days ago. Reviewer: Inform author.

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Submission declined on 15 April 2025 by Jlwoodwa (talk).

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Comment: Fairly minimal changes from the previously declined version, so LLM concerns still apply, as well as the issues explained in the decline notice above. bonadea contributions talk 18:32, 15 April 2025 (UTC)

BME Strategies

BME Strategies is a Massachusetts-based public health consulting firm specializing in public health system design, strategic planning, and implementation programming for local, regional, and state governments. Founded in 2004 by Bryan Murphy-Eustis, the firm works closely with public health agencies to assess system capacity, develop policy frameworks, and enhance service delivery aimed at strengthening community health infrastructure [1].

Mission

The mission of BME Strategies is to create sustainable public health solutions that address systemic gaps and promote equitable access to services in Massachusetts. The firm partners with public health departments and non-governmental organizations to build strategic frameworks that improve service delivery, policy implementation, and long-term community health outcomes [2].

Services and Focus Areas

BME Strategies provides consulting expertise to strengthen public health infrastructure and operations across the following areas:

Program & Project Management
Strategic Planning & Design
Coalition Management & Building
Monitoring, Evaluation, & Quality Improvement
Workforce Development
Emergency Preparedness [3]

Notable Projects and Impact

BME Strategies has contributed to various projects aimed at enhancing Public Health through sustainable solutions. The firm collaborates with governmental bodies, non-profits, and other stakeholders to address Public Health challenges. Some notable case studies include:

Assessing the Capacity of Massachusetts’ Local Public Health System [4]
In Pursuit of Public Health Accreditation [5]
Creating a Statewide Public Health Emergency Operations Plan [6]
Realigning a Regional Collaborative [7]
Creating a Regional Public Health Resource Map [8]
Strategic Planning with a Shared Services Arrangement [9]

Awards and Recognition

BME Strategies has been recognized for its contributions to Public Health. In 2024, the firm received an award from the National Environmental Health Association (NEHA) under the 'Teams' category for its impactful work in Public Health system strengthening [10].

Leadership

Bryan Murphy-Eustis serves as the Founder and Principal Consultant of BME Strategies. With a background in global health management and strategic consulting, he leads the organization’s efforts to drive meaningful improvements in healthcare accessibility and efficiency [11].

Affiliations and Partnerships

BME Strategies has established partnerships with a variety of organizations, including The Max Foundation, Public Health institutions, and non-profits [12]. The firm’s collaborative approach enables it to influence health policy and implement effective public health programs in Massachusetts.

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